Dynamic curve business card 02

For the record, this is the first business card that I've critiqued. I had to reference back to the various business cards in my wallet for comparisons. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/r/r…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Razz)"/>

I really like the color scheme on this. I could imagine a computer programming organization or a computer repair group using this. Something about this screams "computers".

The design on the right is too bold. Ideally, a business card should have a healthy balance of power between the text and the design. If the colors were much more faded, this might be solved. I could also imagine this being solved if the colors sort of bled into the text.

I had to do a double-take when I saw the gray, transparent logo over the design. You know what else is typically gray and transparent? A watermark. Try to never put a gray, transparent logo over a business card. No one wants to use a business card that has a big "watermark" on it, even if it's not an actual watermark.

Concerning the overall design as a whole, I have a bit of trouble absorbing the contrast between the fun, curved design on the right and the organized, linear text on the left. The two seem to clash way too much. The transition between the two sides should be smoother. That in itself could probably solve the problem that I'm referring to.

Overall, great job.